Hey. That sounds pretty good! It does remind me of Deadmau5. I have a couple suggestions. I think it is a bit quiet. It is slightly repetitive, especially closer to the end. I think even though it isn't what Deadmau5 would do, I think it would sound great. Sorry, I don't have a ton to say, and I know it took me a long time to get this done. But good job!
-cga-999 of the Review Request Club
thanks a lot! I wonder why you would think it's quiet. Its pretty thrashed on the master.
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This is really good. It really does make me think of winter. Winter is a beautiful season, as is this song. I think this is a great piece of music, (the voices are also really cool.) and it really captures the season. Too bad I have no snow in St. Paul. Are you getting snow?
Nope, no snow in Jordan. It feels like fall. I only had to wear a sweatshirt on my way to school, which was nice. Thanks for the review!
I think you should actually try to make the noises into a song. Also take out the voices. I can never say too much about stuff I know was intentionally a joke. Sorry about that.
It would be better on a different instruments that can play chords, such as a piano, and maybe edit out the mistakes. I don't have a lot to say here, but I hope I was able to help a little bit.
Even though it is repetitive, I like it. I would say to add more parts to it. It is very repetitive. It does have have more than one part, but the transitions are poor. I would love to see music like this by you if you could make it less repetitive and maybe take out some of the middle section.
I prefer not to leave helpful reviews on random sounds.
Thank You.
This is a great song! I love how you had the instruments. They sounded perfect together! You are one of my favorite musicians on Newgrounds. I love your music, and this one is no exception.
Nice! This sounds great! Hard to believe this is only a fourteen second loop. I would love this to be longer, though. This is a great loop. I have never been a huge fan of dubstep, so this surprised me with its quality. Great song!
Very nice, but I have some suggestions.
Cut out the last 15 seconds, there isn't much there.
Add drums, that would sound awesome.
Make multiple sections, because it is repetitive to listen to the same line for a minute and a half.
Thank you for considering my suggestions, and I hope you are successful with your music!
Thank you for your comment!
I did notice that last minute of the blank part. I think that was what happened after I saved it, I just did not change it.
I was trying to do a beat here, but got stuck. So all there was is the tambourine.
Also, that was my second time trying to make a song. The first time it had more of a drum beat with sample vocals. But I am still experimenting and I was working on another version that I feel may be better. But I think I may need the full version of FL Studio for more instrument options. I only have the demo version.
I do like it, but there are a couple of suggestions I have:
1. Have more parts- it's a bit repetitive.
2. Make less random transitions.
3. I noticed some notes in the 1:15-2:15 that don't fit in very well. They work, but I would have made those notes quieter.
Cool song, though!
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