I like how the whole song has the same chords in the background. It does get a bit repetitive after a little while. I think that if you were to take out the last note, it would make a nice loop. I think that it would sound better in E major, but that might just be me... Anyway, it is a good song with a few small things that I think would make it better. :)
THANK YOU!! I still have to experiment more with FL Studio. I only have the demo version. However, I hope one day to get the full version for more instrument options. ^-^
Well, it was an alright song. I know this isn't intended to be amazing, but it is certainly okay. Not much to say here, but you told me to One Star it, so I have done as I have been told. :)
Alright, this is good. :) But I have suggestions. I think it could have done without the voice- in fact, I would have removed that entirely. The voice is a bit annoying, but if you like it, that's fine by me. I like that you put dubstep into it at the same time as putting some melody into it. I really like the end of it. That is a really cool part. Overall, it sounds good.
i love melodys to much not to blend them :3 vocs wher more fun then anything for me :p knowing where they are from makes it feel better to me :p
thanks for the review n.n
I really like the beginning, all the way through the end! The voice was really cool, but slightly unnecessary in my opinion. I would have probably done it once, but twice is okay as well, I guess.The name of this piece really does make a lot of sense. You did the parts of it perfectly, so each different section sounds like they are parts of the same song.
ty for the review n.n
i was planning on puting more vocs in it but i couldent get them as clear as i wanted to much bg noise from where i was takeing them from o.o
the name of the song is ambient hell cos i took alot of the sounds from a a anime called hell girl so its even more fitting i think n.n
ty for the review n.n
This is an excellent mashup. Forest Interlude and Mining Melancholy really do go well together. I love that you thought of this, because even though neither song is your own composition, it sounds like your own, because it is both put together. Amazing idea! :)
On to the suggestions. I think you should have either made it a loop or composed your own ending, because songs that just go quiet bother me just a little bit. An idea for the title as well, I think that the title, "Melancholy Forest" would have sounded better.
I hope my review served as helpful!
-cga-999 of the Review Request Club
Hahaha thanks ^^ I should edit the mp3, i do have a version that loops perfectly, it just i thought that a fade out would make it sound better, thanks for the review ^^
I love this piece! I'm normally not a fan of that electronic sound, but this time it is really good. I love how you put this up right now. It does remind me of an Ecstatic Snowstorm. :) I have a couple small suggestions. Maybe cut out the last few seconds because I didn't hear anything there. It didn't necessarily need the voices in my opinion, but it was still cool. I hope my feedback served as valuable. Good job!
Thanks, really glad you liked it :). Yea I know there are some void left on the end of the song. Fl-studio tends to do that some time when exporting. As for the voices, you are not the first one who has commented on my excessive use of voice samples, but I think it gives the song a bit more life at times X3.
Thx for the nice feedback :).
This is definitely an interesting piece. I think that it is quite repetitive, so that would be cool if you added more parts. There is more parts, but I think there should be more variation. I agree that the genre is hard to say. I don't think this made the best loop, it would have been better as a song, rather than continuously repeating itself. The reason I think that is because it doesn't end with something that could bring you right back to the beginning. I hope my feedback was valuable. Good job overall, I will check out some of your other pieces.
I like the sound of this piece, but I have some suggestions. The title is a little bit leading, it made me think of more of, I don't know, just a different sounding piece. It is a great volume, and it has transitions that are not too random. I also could see this with different instruments, because it doesn't seem to be electric guitar only, but maybe I'm wrong. This is an impressive song overall. Good job!
Thank you for your review!
That's rigth, there's a part with keyboard.
This sounds good. It is a bit quiet at the beginning. I love how you made the transitions noticeable and not too random. I love how you completely changed the genre and entire feeling of the song at about a minute, that was the first time I had seen that. That is really cool. I think it would make a good loop if you made a less clear ending. Sorry I took so long to get to reviewing this great music. Great job, RandomDanceOfHappy!
had to make it quite at the start so the quick filters dident make peoples ears bleed ;3
i was really haapy with how this song turned out givein i made this in close to 2 hours
good luck on takeing over the rrc :p try to spend as much time as i can reviewing stuff from there
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